01/11/2017
Write a letter to an airline manager to find out about something you forgot on the plane during your travel. In your letter
– give details about your flight
– describe the item you forgot
– explain why it is important that you get it back
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am a loyal client of your airline for almost ten years by now and I am writing to ask you about a favor. On 29th October 2017, I flew from Moscow to New York by Airbus A320, flight number NG40R10 in the first class. My seat number was A10.
On this flight with me, I had a workstation Lenovo W540p with a 4K display. I was using it while I was flying. Unfortunately, I forgot my laptop in the cabin. The computer is black and has a sticker on the surface that states: “this machine kills fascists”. The workstation should be in a big read with white straps case that I used while traveling. So, I think you will identify it quickly.
I want you to return this piece of equipment because the retail price of such a laptop is about three and a half thousand dollars. Moreover, some sensitive data is stored in a hard drive of the computer that should not be lost or get into wrong hands. I hope that you can help me with this problem.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk.
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Essay evaluation report
On this flight with me,
On this flight,
The workstation should be in a big read with white straps case
The workstation should be in a big red case with white straps
flaws:
this essay is not outstanding, look:
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 196 250
No. of Characters: 806 1200
No. of Different Words: 128 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.742 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.112 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.26 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.758 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.644 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madame, I am a loyal client of your airline for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42346938776 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51568900509 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3549480617 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9285714286 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165493314916 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466518292185 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050320408143 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775639781485 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456210996738 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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