Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear SIr,
I was thrilled to come across the computer course that your esteemed institution would be conducting next month. I found the advertisement in the newspaper this morning and therefore, I am writing to you.
I have always been interested in learning computers since my school days. However, the career path I chose did not need much computer skills. Hence, I never had an opportunity to join a course. Additionally, I spend most of my time travelling to work. Fortunately, as my office is shifting close to my residence, I will save on my commute time to and fro. I am quite keen on joining the course with your institution and I believe the registrations have already begun starting today as mentioned in the advertisement. I am willing to enroll and the icing on the cake is that the timings suit me perfectly!
The advertisement also mentions that one has to have completed an elementary course. As I mentioned above, I never took any course due to my schedule hence I am requesting you to make an exception for me as I really am passionate towards learning this skill. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Harbani Bhamra.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eed much computer skills. Hence, I never had an opportunity to join a course. Add...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82266009852 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98984343652 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5858142961 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278561281438 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867303412364 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735989911227 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180929239145 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399104188339 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.