Dear Brian,
I am very glad that you have decided to visit Baku at the beginning of September. The timing is perfect because the air temperature will not be so high as it is now, and the water temperature will be still good enough to swim in the Caspian Sea. Another advantage of the time you have chosen is my availability. I will be done with my IELTS exam already by that time and will have some time before the start of lessons in the University of Chicago. Needless to say that opportunity to celebrate your birthday here, in Baku, also makes me happy.
I have some ideas how we could celebrate your birthday. The first option is to go to the restaurant of Japanese cuisine, Zakura. I know that you like Asian cuisine and think you will not be disappointed with that place. Another option is to arrange barbecue on my dacha. We can purchase prefabricated meat or stakes and cook them in the garden. Certainly, a couple of bottles of local wine will complement the barbecue.
Brain, I would appreciate if you let me know how you would prefer to spend time on your birthday. Thus, I will book a table in Zakura or make required arrangements on the dacha.
Best regards,
Vadim.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55348837209 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57677776823 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595348837209 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9378182888 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9285714286 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232708286939 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711407130376 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724129886424 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165926426043 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114856184963 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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