An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit.
write a letter to your friend In your letter
* say how you feel about the visit
* suggest what you could do on his/her birthday
*try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea
Dear Ahmet,
I am tremendously happy when I received your email this morning. Today is the fabulous day and how excited when I heard you will come here next month.
Besides, you will have a birthday during the visit. I spent my time creating content for your birthday. I have a wonderful plan for it. Initially, on the occasion, a big room will be decorated nicely. when our friends and guests arrive there, we will show an exhilarating video that is related to your life. we will stand around a table where a beautiful birthday cake will be placed. you will blow out candles and cut the cake. All our friends and guests will be then entertained with delicious beverages and birthday cake.
I wonder about your decision about my plan. From my point of view is that you will fancy it. If you are not satisfied with this plan, I will contrive to find a new one. Tell me about your idea in your next letter. Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Abdulkadir YILDIZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ahmet, I am tremendously happy when I received ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...n, a big room will be decorated nicely. when our friends and guests arrive there, we...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ing video that is related to your life. we will stand around a table where a beaut...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...beautiful birthday cake will be placed. you will blow out candles and cut the cake....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56497175141 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33054785106 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5013297496 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.5 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0625 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3125 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349035917399 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108793376042 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757762220476 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212889592954 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657597461503 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.98 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.