ADVANTAGES OF LİVİNG İN BİG CİTİES
Nowadays, there is a debate among people whether cities or towns are preferred for living. While some people think that living in such big cities as capital or any other great city can result in a comfortable life, others think that the small town does not only give them peace, but also make them healthier than people living in big cities. In my opinion, dwelling in big cities has more merits.
The first reason why I believe this is eminence, is because there are lots of options in big cities. Most small towns have fewer educational institutions, On the other hand, big cities have many universities, colleges and courses. Not to mention people have the option for their career making field. Moreover, as in particular there are educators who are prominent and proficient living in big cities, people can become well cultured and be successful in any assessment.
What is more, entertainment is also another reason why people choose to live in big cities. They have much greater access to variety of entertainment venues, and they are exposed to all sorts of different cultures. Besides, big cities have many types of music, comedy festivals, and other events that happen on a fairly regular basis. In addition, according to a recent survey 70% of people who live in big cities go to these festivals every year. This number is magnificent.
Furthermore, the last reason is the transportation system. People must need to buy their own vehicle or depend on others for a ride. Owning a vehicle can be costly because of gas expenses and insurances. Big cities have multiple forms of public transportation like taxis, cabs, and a bus system. People can always use a public transportation for a reasonable price.
In brief, big cities are actually ideal places for everyone. They provide people with a lot of essential advantages such as adequate eminence, wonderful entertainment and advanced transportation system. I believe that big cities are more convenient for people’s future and their daily lives than living in small towns.
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- An Australian friend is coming to visit you and it will be his her birthday during the visit write a letter to your friend In your letter say how you feel about the visit suggest what you could do on his her birthday try to find out what you friend thinks 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in brief, such as, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07826086957 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7593989769 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5201726572 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270077719897 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769866732174 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670885682677 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13276496059 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800864610489 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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