The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
In the year of 1995, about 60% of people born outside of Australia who lives among cities. In towns folks land into earth less than village ares at the same year i.e. aorund 18%. Whereas rural areas percentage is higher i.e. 40%. Parellely, within australia cities birth percentage is lesser than rest of the world where percentage remains around 46%. But there is no huge difference between towns & village birth rate in compare to out side world.
In other hand, in 2010, there is a complete different senario & massive gap we can see. Birth rate in the city is much higher in urban and underdeveloped areas in compare to australia & rest of the world. Also, we can see there is lesser gap in between town & rural areas both for inside & outside of the Australia.
In conclusion, I would like to mention, due to the advance life style people has moved to cities nowadays. This is why gradually, we can notice the changes in the graph in the recent days.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... ares at the same year i.e. aorund 18%. Whereas rural areas percentage is higher i.e. 4...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...ame year i.e. aorund 18%. Whereas rural areas percentage is higher i.e. 40%. Parellel...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...owns & village birth rate in compare to out side world. In other hand, in 2010, ther...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71641791045 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34117512203 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5152221186 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445347918585 0.216113520407 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157248963149 0.0766984524023 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23413393008 0.0603063233224 388% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311597732985 0.12726935374 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.31611621085 0.0580467560999 545% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... ares at the same year i.e. aorund 18%. Whereas rural areas percentage is higher i.e. 4...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...ame year i.e. aorund 18%. Whereas rural areas percentage is higher i.e. 40%. Parellel...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...owns & village birth rate in compare to out side world. In other hand, in 2010, ther...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71641791045 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34117512203 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5152221186 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445347918585 0.216113520407 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157248963149 0.0766984524023 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.23413393008 0.0603063233224 388% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311597732985 0.12726935374 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.31611621085 0.0580467560999 545% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.