The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows some changes about the percentage of people were born inside Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between years 1995 and 2010.
In the year 1995, urban area people were born both inside and outside Australia was More than 40% and 60% respectively. In rural area people born in Australia was less than 40% and people born outside Australia 40%. In town area people born in Australia was 20% and people born outside Australia was Less than 20%.
In the year 2010, urban area people born inside Australia was slightly higher than 60% and born outside Australia was 80%. In rural area people born inside and outside Australia are slightly less than 20% and slightlyhigher than 0% respectively. In town area people born inside and outside Australia are slightly less than 20% and 10% respectively.
Hence, urban area people born inside and outside Australia have remained high in both the years, and it's high in the year 2010 compared to the year 1995.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and people born outside Australia 40%. In town area people born in Australia was ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...outside Australia was Less than 20%. In the year 2010, urban area people born i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...60% and born outside Australia was 80%. In rural area people born inside and outsi...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd slightlyhigher than 0% respectively. In town area people born inside and outsid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88439306358 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31616701113 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 127.690721649 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.341040462428 0.622605031667 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2393142874 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447814251964 0.216113520407 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.293024749954 0.0766984524023 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168147466547 0.0603063233224 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373089580084 0.12726935374 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.210074067725 0.0580467560999 362% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.86 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 41.2886597938 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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