The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
This graph illustrates that the number of undergraduates who selected eight subjects at university in 2005.
As is observed from the graph, the was collected divided into males and females. Futhermore, the figure of that had sharply differences in subjects.
It is clear that Social Science was the most favourite subject, which was chosen by females at university, with nearly 25 thousands. Language attracted more females than males and stood at the second in subjects on the graph of girl students with about 20 thousands. While the number of males attended this subject was lowest, occupied for just around 3 thousands.The proportion of males who chose Science was twice higher than that of females, at approximated 20 thousands and 10 thousands respectively. 20 thousands was the participation of males in Mathematics, whereas just less than 5 thousands of female prefered it. We can see that the number of males and males in Humantics was the same, accounted for over 10 thousands.
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- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparisons where relevant 67
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...t, occupied for just around 3 thousands.The proportion of males who chose Science w...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 thousand'.
Suggestion: 5 thousand
... in Mathematics, whereas just less than 5 thousands of female prefered it. We can see that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95464212917 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4426206971 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994793007392 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052040987165 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726846302296 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982143954449 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977494528838 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.