In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Current prevailing practices in Britain dictates, old-age home becomes residence of many parents during later part of their life. These habitant have nurses to look after and take care of their daily needs. Though, occasionally, government takes care of these expenses, but my views contradicts to this general perception. Alike children, during their childhood, are moral responsibility of their parents, accordingly, parents, during their old age, are moral responsibility of their children.
Let us have a look in light of certain points. Firstly, if we take our thought process beyond this materialistic world, human being are to love and things are to use. Material things are to be used for getting satisfaction in life and, not the other way round. Secondly, it is responsibility of the family to take of their aged parents and bear the cost of their living, as it was born by parents to grow up their child. Thirdly, while benefits of parents earning was availed by children, than why should government bear the cost to take of them instead of family.
On contrary, however, a person, during his adult age, paid taxes on their earning so that government will take of them during their old age for his basic necessities. In such case, government should compensate them in the form of monthly pension to let them live an honorable living. And, old-age parent can live with the family at family cost. Such parents can teach their invaluable life experiences to their children or grandchildren.
To sum up, parents has spent their life for the children future at and huge monetary and non-monetary cost. Now the coin flips towards other side to pay back. Government should liable to make necessary facilities and amenities available to citizens, pay monthly pensions, making hospitals available for free medication.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this habitant' or 'These habitants'?
Suggestion: This habitant; These habitants
...arents during later part of their life. These habitant have nurses to look after and take care...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ke of them during their old age for his basic necessities. In such case, government should compen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77463211924 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6058214629 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212514076405 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760095587087 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457751777596 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132699785401 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221954632655 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this habitant' or 'These habitants'?
Suggestion: This habitant; These habitants
...arents during later part of their life. These habitant have nurses to look after and take care...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ke of them during their old age for his basic necessities. In such case, government should compen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77463211924 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6058214629 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212514076405 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760095587087 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457751777596 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132699785401 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221954632655 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.