Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree
With the advent of nuclear family style and rapidly changing lifestyle, Fast food has become indispensable part of our eating habits and quite happily adapted at many places. In contrast, many people consider this a fatty, high cholesterol and unhealthy for their lifestyle and diet. Each group has their own reasons for saying so. So far I am concerned, I am big fan for natural and balanced diet. Accordingly inclined towards later school of though and I would substantiate my inclination based on some facts.
At first, fast food carries high cholesterol and calories in it. Consumption of such foodstuff moves to one step closure towards obesity and cardiac conditions. Secondly, these processed foods may look delicious for the time being and add tastes to your tongue, but its frequent consumption has varied aftereffects such as malnutrition, skin diseases and many more. Wherein, balance diet required few minutes of physical exercise to digest food and stay healthy, fast foods requires greater amount of time in the Gym which, eventually, takes out your leisure time and cutting happy moments that could be spent along with family.
In addition, certainly, fast food is easy and quicker to cook, tasty, easy to carry and readily available through places, but health should be our supreme importance. Fast food has become common in western country and is massively spreading its wings in every family kitchen, but developing nation as still close to their traditional cooking style which keep them closure to their culture, taste and recipes. That is why, we frequently hear the phrase “My mother recipe” from many ladies mouth. It gives them feel of honor.
To conclude, no doubt, fast food has become part of various people lifestyle but there are many who value their culture, health, diet and natural things as I do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
... big fan for natural and balanced diet. Accordingly inclined towards later school of though...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12956810631 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54717848466 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65780730897 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1388200759 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187670877711 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575223519031 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589698114055 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124728096201 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620233782738 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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