It is commonly argued that junk food is becoming a nightmare for both diet and living style of people in many countries. I support this view because of lack of cooking skills in today’s generation, less nutritious value in food items and quality of food.
In today’s hectic lifestyle, people become unaware of cooking skills. Owing to the fact that they have no free time to cook food for themselves, they purchased cooked food from outside, and mostly from street markets and the restaurants. Therefore, the traditional meals are losing their importance as well as people are never fascinated to learn these skills as they are more focusing on their other work . A survey, for example, conducted by World health organization in the USA, in 2017, revealed that 80% people out of 100 in Northern America were facing overweight and thyroid problems by consuming more junk food.
Apart from this, the fast food have not as much as nutrients as home-made food. This is because the fast food is never cooked in front of consumers, cooks add some preservatives in the cuisines to keep them fresh for long time. The raw vegetables and meats are not cleaned properly; resultantly, the person who eats this food will definitely face stomach infections and this is also affect the overall health of a person.
Moreover, unhealthy food quality is introducing different diseases. Since non-vegetarian meals are not always cooked from the fresh meat even thishave some disease earlier or not, owners of the fast food stalls or restaurants always purchased food items with low rates, for their more profit. Hence, several diseases are coming from these meals such as swine flu. For instance, had my cousin, rosy, never leave the habit of eating outside from the food stalls, she could never controlled her overweight by eating oily and fried food.
In conclusion, owing to less knowledge of cooking food, low nutrients in food and low quality of ingredients all are harmful for the holistic development of people and not only this will affect their health, but also make them internally weak. I am convinced that given argument is logically sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00840336134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5748311839 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2676991062 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180509304321 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660942402932 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442130207542 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113283371903 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423234211796 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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