The chart below shows the percentage of the whole population in four countries from 1950 to 2000.with projection till 2050.
The given column illustrates the changing percentage of the global population in India, China, Japan and the USA between 1950 to 2000. And there predicted till 2050.
First of all, On behalf of the graph information. In 1950, china population growth was incredible it's the highest percentage (26%). After five years it alleviating slightly, but the actual drawback was in the prediction it will be below 20% In 2050. Compare to Japan was phasing lot of nature casualties, that why they are very predictable people in the world. Their population was average in every year, 4% in the year 2000. It will slightly change in 2050.
After that, India was a democratic country. In 1950, India population was 15% it was augmented climb. After five years it rises to 19% in 2000. India population will above 20% in 2050. To compare the super-powerful countries population was 10% in 1950. After that it alleviating dramatically it will similar in 2000 and 2050.
I conclude that India was only one country whose graph was augmented rapidly and china population was drawback significantly. I deem that, the government should take some action among thise types of awareness. people need some understanding about the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
... china population growth was incredible its the highest percentage 26%. After five ...
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...he year 2000. It will slightly change in 2050. After that, India was a democr...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pulation was 15% it was augmented rose. After five years it rises to 19% in 2000. Ind...
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Suggestion: People
... action among thise types of awareness. people need some understanding about the futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05472636816 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78678029316 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3482349518 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7647058824 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8235294118 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.94845360825 405% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203197717316 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781587535568 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619461722574 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146325949961 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692710617745 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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