City council is planing to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen you don't want it to happen. Write a letter to a city council and say
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in future.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regard to the news that I read about the Krishna temple in the National Daily today. In the article, it has been mentioned that the ancient monument, as per the plans of the council, is going to be dismantled soon which has drawn a much wider attention of the public of which I am also one concerned member.
Firstly, I would like to highlight how important this temple has been for the Nepalese community. This elaborate age-old temple stands as a reminder of our rich cultural heritage and no society which has an admiration for these sublime cultural marvel would allow it to disappear. Moreover, the most fascinating fact about this temple is that it was carved out of a single rock and serves as a living example of our profound and glorious civilization.
As for the solution to preserve this beautiful gem, the council can coordinate with the federal government and the tourism ministry to seek financial assistance from the UN for its renovation works. In my knowledge, Part of UNESCO's mission is to conserve and promote cultural heritage and I take hope in the fact that they will be willing to offer help.
I hope you will appreciate my ideas.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;">I look forward to your reply.</span>
Yours faithfully,
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n which has drawn a much wider attention of the public of which I am also one con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12612612613 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28933711522 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8876288512 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.444444444 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728183957082 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278677718753 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220348169195 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0363724117479 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023328697609 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.