City council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you don’t want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council and say – What is the importance of the building? – Why should it be renovated? – Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to raise my concern to the city council about the plan to demolish one of the heritage building in my neighbourhood, due to lack of funds to renovate it, about which I got to know from yesterday's newspaper.
The structure is very significant as it was built in the early 1800s by the king of the city, and has linked to many historical events. Furthermore, the design and material used to construct the building is unique, which can be inspirational to many architecture students.
Keeping this historical inheritance for the next generation should be the primary reason to restore. Additionally, this could be developed as the city landmark, as well.
A public crowd-funding program can be organised to raise charity, and transformation of the building into a museum, wherein a marginal fee can be collected for the maintenance in the future.
As a Citizen, I urge a considerate not to pull down the historic building.
Yours faithfully,
Kaplan Vaghela
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18320716455 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3141966703 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190798648862 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071307251283 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625526159934 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971857442703 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709430261846 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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