City council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you don’t want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council and say
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing this letter on behalf of RWA (Resident Welfare Society) to let you know that the Council’s proposal to diminish the famous monument, Rajput Palace, has hurt sentiments of masses.
The Palace plays an important role in everyone’s life as all of us has, in some point in time, spent winters in its garden. The structure is over 150 years old and it is famous for its interior, which is hand carved. The building houses many artefacts which were technological marvel of that era.
All of us are disturbed with the council’s decision of bringing it down rather than bringing it back to its glory. The place is a famous tourist spot in the neighborhood and showcase our rich culture.
RWA (Resident Welfare Association) will provide some financial aid to refurbish its interior and we have, also, talked with local businessmen, who are ready to invest. Additionally, we can charge nominal fee from visitors for its daily maintenance.
I hope we were able to convince the council to change its mind.
Your faithfully,
Ajay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for its interior, which is hand carved. The building houses many artefacts which we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15083798883 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86935553931 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703910614525 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2619939544 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177130074775 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059896720762 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390118839294 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08946874183 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296437488422 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.