A close friend is coming to visit you. He has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and surrounding area
Write a letter to your friend, in your letter:
Ask for more details about your friend's plan:
suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown
Tell your friend about food and drinks should try.
Dear John,
It's great to know that you are coming for a visit to my hometown. I am eager to show you around. There are a lot of attractions and fabulous things happening at my place. Prior to that, I would like to know the date of your visit and staying days here so it could help to plan well and make the trip most fruitful.
There are a plethora of places to be visited in Hyderabad. To start with, the famous and old fort built in around 1200 AD is a historical place forming as an icon of this city. It is built by one of the kings who ruled this state and used the scientific techniques to pass the data from one point to another point using the walls of the fort.
Apart from this monument, there is a water body at the center of the city with restaurants, pubs, shopping malls stretching around its bay. Our city has numerous parks, decent multiplexes and moreover the world's best IMAX screen. The food that should be never missed here is Biryani - which is the world famous recipe along with Nanari drink, which can not be found elsewhere.
I cannot wait to have good days with you.
Regards,
Weber
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-11 | sai.varadula | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...like to know the date of your visit and your staying days here so that it could help...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, apart from, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37914691943 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18079663804 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654028436019 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1525403435 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173027522533 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575647040532 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721716531045 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967180828486 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121372495393 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.