A college asked its graduates to give a speech to current students about their professional carriers and future opportunities. You would like to participate. Write a letter and say
- What do you want to talk about?
- Why do you think students will be interested in it?
- Suggest a suitable date and time for your speech.
I am writing this letter to express my willingness to address the present batch on professional careers and future prospects in the field of physiotherapy. I am Richa Mahajan, I graduated from your esteemed Apollo Physiotherapy college of batch 2017.
I would like to talk about recent advances in pain management and electrotherapy for pain reduction. Currently, I am working as a clinical physiotherapist in New York. Over here advance techniques and instruments like Laser, bio scan and three-dimensional traction are used for the treatment. So, I thought it would be a great idea to introduce them to the latest innovations in our field. In addition to it, I will also enlighten them about future scope in the role of physiotherapy in neurogenic pain, and excellent career opportunities as a pain specialist.
I will be coming to India for a three week vacation next month. I will be free from 10th to 15 December. Do let me know the date and time which would be suitable for you. I will be glad to interact with new students and to revive some nostalgic memories of my college days.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Richa Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...siotherapy college of batch 2017. I would like to talk about recent advance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99494949495 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17673555893 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5244990779 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0769230769 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216085339617 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607754168509 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506522237378 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980347020128 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689730432139 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.