The company you work for introduced a work-from-home scheme. Write a letter to your manager asking for the work-from-home option. In your letter say
- What part of your job can be done from home?
- How many hours will you be able to work from home?
- How will it be helpful to you as well as your employer?
Dear Sir,
In response to company’s recent implementation of a work-from-home scheme. I would like to request that I be considered for this scheme. I feel that my position handling projects of our valuable clients will not be affected.
Currently, the project that I am handling is in the design phase and that does not require many involvements of the business users as most of the requirements are clear in the initial phase. Hence, the rest of the projects I can directly coordinate with the client without any hesitation. I can see the various benefits of the company like, I can work more flexibly on UK GMT time so I will be more available for our clients for the support. Moreover, as I am unavailable for the two weeks company can temporary allocate my space to our UK delegate. My working time will be 4:00 PM to 9:00 PM.
I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Jaineel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... positive response. Yours sincerely, Jaineel
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, moreover, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96167578197 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1555811926 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280674750115 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100949390388 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772933272386 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170553165711 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893821228146 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.