You are in a hospital with a broken leg. Your colleagues sent you get well cards and gifts. Write a letter to them and include the following:
- Thank them for everything.
- Explain how you spend time in the hospital.
- Inform them about your recovery process.
Dear Colleagues,
Hope you all are doing well despite having all workload. With this letter, I want to offer my deepest gratitude to all of you sending me such a wonderful gifts and cards.
I felt really well after receiving these presents, which comprise the affectionate get well soon. Especially the bouquet of fruits and biscuits, sent by Lily and Joseph was like by my family as well as hospital staff. Here, in the hospital, it is not easy to pass the time; but; I am partly relying on the mobile phone which assists me to kill my time. I also read the newspaper, watch T.V. and gossip with my family member as well as the hospital staff who are really very humble and calm which helps me to pass my daytime.
Doctor has put me on the high care intensive unit and yesterday she visits me, unfortunately, my recovery is not good so I have to stay more three days in the hospital but looking at hospital facility and staff I do not mind stay here for that much time.
Do not hesitate, if you require any help from my side, I will provide from here. I look forward your continued support.
Regards,
Jaineel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49756097561 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37135392818 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.172346069 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158530056372 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609195042813 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255667199016 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933273383107 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239780976947 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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