Dear Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I recently got your letter seeking advice on your future plans. I feel very happy to know that you still remember me as a good friend.
As far as I know, you are an average student in writing exams who always gets just passing grades. Once you told me that, you are doing school only for the certificates. Hence, i don't think you will enjoy your rest of the college life because you feel very stress in writing exams.
However, i know computer skill is your perk in your life. You remember that at school while all student are struggling to get the concept of designing, you did very well and got applause. I can see very bright future in graphic designing. At first, it can take time to get new job as expected but don't get hopeless and try to find the job you are into. I know you will earn good income as well good skill in future.
Hope you are more clear in your vision now.
Have a nice day.
Thank you.
Your faithfully
Asmita
Dear Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I recently got your letter seeking advice on your future plans. I feel very happy to know that you still remember me as a good friend.
As far as I know, you are an average student in writing exams who always gets just passing grades. Once you told me that, you are doing school only for the certificates. Hence, i don't think you will enjoy your rest of the college life because you feel very stress in writing exams.
However, i know computer skill is your perk in your life. You remember that at school while all student are struggling to get the concept of designing, you did very well and got applause. I can see very bright future in graphic designing. At first, it can take time to get new job as expected but don't get hopeless and try to find the job you are into. I know you will earn good income as well good skill in future.
Hope you are more clear in your vision now.
Have a nice day.
Thank you.
Your faithfully
Asmita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Smith, I hope you are doing well. I recently got...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ar Smith, I hope you are doing well. I recently got your letter seeking advice...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er seeking advice on your future plans. I feel very happy to know that you still ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...er seeking advice on your future plans. I feel very happy to know that you still ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ember me as a good friend. As far as I know, you are an average student in wri...
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Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...chool only for the certificates. Hence, i dont think you will enjoy your rest of ...
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Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ry stress in writing exams. However, i know computer skill is your perk in you...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ng, you did very well and got applause. I can see very bright future in graphic d...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...s and try to find the job you are into. I know you will earn good income as well ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, still, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36021505376 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07084184345 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8165988511 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9285714286 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.684362916055 0.216113520407 317% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219235345312 0.0766984524023 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130837400483 0.0603063233224 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.42271568586 0.12726935374 332% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183976597407 0.0580467560999 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.