The diagram shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment.
The diagram reveals the process of making photographs by using digital photographic equipment. Overall, there are 3 pieces of equipment involved, namely Digital camera having smart card, computer and printer.
At the first stage, Image is captured by a camera and recorded onto a smart card in a camera. After this, the picture is downloaded to computer. Here the image can be shown on the screen and edited. The picture may be cut so that some less interesting or unnecessary parts are removed. Moreover, in order to improve the quality of the image, some features can be changed such as color, sharpness and so on. In addition, size and resolution of picture can be formatted to suit for use. When the editing has been completed, the photograph can be transmitted in three ways. It could be sent for other people by email or it could be stored on the computer itself or on CD. Alternatively, the image can be sent to the printer to print on photo paper. It may be printed in colour or in black and white to produce a finished photograph on paper.
- The map below is of the town of Barnrook. A new school (S) is palnned for the area. The map show two possible sites for the school.Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevants. 78
- Overpopulation can lead to numerous problems. 22
- The diagram shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66915856516 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8340336011 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371506163519 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129910853246 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133571684967 0.0603063233224 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300366491254 0.12726935374 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420056619683 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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