Overpopulation can lead to numerous problems.
Population explosion results in numerous problems. One of the most major matters is lack of space for accommodation. This is because of overpopulation would place a great demands on resources on land. Therefore, it would raise the housing cost and put pressure on low-income people to own a house. Another drawback of overcrowding is environmental pollution. Every day, tons of domestic garbage would be discharged from a large number of vehicles. This situation can make a negative effect on our health, especially on respiratory. Last but not least, high unemployment rate is a big disadvantage of population bomb as there fewer jobs to support a large number of people. Consequently, it would give rise to crime because people could steal various items to feed their family and provide them basic demand of life. Therefore, governments should take this problem into account and enhance our policies to control it efficiently.
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- The map below is of the town of Barnrook. A new school (S) is palnned for the area. The map show two possible sites for the school.Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevants. 78
- The diagram shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment 70
- Overpopulation can lead to numerous problems. 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore, it would raise the housing cost and put pressure on low-income people to own...
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Line 1, column 422, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mestic garbage would be discharged from a large number of vehicles. This situation can make a neg...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ion bomb as there fewer jobs to support a large number of people. Consequently, it would give ris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26174496644 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07924261093 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724832214765 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8730647909 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983911741638 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411450055243 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770792651086 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983911741638 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.