during a recent job plane journey, you sat next to businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one oh his restaurant.
write a letter to this businessman, in your letter:
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for this job
Dear Mr.jhonny, I write this letter, because of your suggest which I have a chance to work in your restaurant and you suggest me to contact you about a possible job in one your restaurants
we met at train a week ago at 07:00 pm and we talk anything else such as business or education. I am graduated from university which has relevant cooking with. It was so amazing to meet you that have a number of restaurants and you manage it.
Cooking is my majority and my special skill that is my hobby. Every single day, I always attempt to a new receipt and write in note. Sometimes when I cook too much desert, I will give to next my room apartment or friend. Working in the big restaurant is the big dream for me especially style of menu in your restaurant.
Every single time, I always learn about dish concerned taste in our country and try to attempt some ingredients. It is possible to attract people with a new food’s taste.
Thank you very much
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38418079096 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52407729625 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1824024217 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267832006926 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777295395155 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993403052237 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152935692974 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158944534004 0.0580467560999 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38418079096 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52407729625 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1824024217 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267832006926 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777295395155 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993403052237 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152935692974 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158944534004 0.0580467560999 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.