During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you because I’m interested in becoming the chef cook at your new Sichuan restaurant.
We met on a plane from Shanghai to Vancouver last week; I was sitting next to you. We had a pleasant talk on about Chinese food — especially Sichuan cuisine — and I was deeply impressed by your knowledge of it. As luck would have it, you told me that you were opening a Chinese restaurant of Sichuan cuisine in Vancouver. After knowing that I have been a cook of Sichuan cuisine for 6 years, you offered to further discuss the possibilities of me being the chef cook of your Sichuan restaurant.
I would love to become the chef cook of your Sichuan restaurant and I believe I’m the right person for this position. I was born and raised in Sichuan; I grew up eating Sichuan food. My interest in cooking began when I was a teenager. After high school, I studied Sichuan cuisine in Sichuan Culinary School and graduated with first-class honors when I was 21. I have been a Sichuan cuisine cook since graduation and currently, I’m the chef cook of a famous Sichuan restaurant in Shanghai. I am young and energetic, and I speak fluent English, which would help a lot for a living and be working in Canada. My resume is attached to the email; please have a look if you are interested.
I believe your new restaurant is going to be a success because of your vision for Chinese restaurants in Vancouver, as well as your interest and knowledge in Sichuan cuisine. That is why I have chosen to be part of your team.
Thank you for taking your time to read my message. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Terry Pang
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| 2019-04-13 | shiny jaya ratna | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 300.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64666666667 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6216534223 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.113433708 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12748508505 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537833145016 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437254908506 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931413020959 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498316999501 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.