During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
write a letter to this businessman, In your letter
- remind him when and where you met.
- tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- say why you think would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing to inquire about any job opportunity currently available at one of your prestigious restaurants in Delhi.
My name is Ell Green and I met you last month during my excursion from Delhi to Milan in flight AI434 on 20th September. I was sitting next to your aisle seat and got a chance to have words with you. It was pleasure talking to you and during our conversation you mentioned about branches of your restaurant spread all over the India.
As you asked me to feel free to contact you in the future for any job possibility. So, I thought of writing you. I am interested in part-time job for the post of assistant chef at your restaurant. My preferred location is Delhi as I am studying here.
For aforementioned job, I hold one year diploma in cooking from Delhi University as well as 3 months full-time experience as a chef. My specialty is Italian cuisine and I hope that you would consider my profile for your restaurant.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67934782609 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77992716412 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4576953486 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23070124136 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917750503684 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588305819741 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129520727008 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485605855811 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.