During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a
chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should
contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• remind him when and where you met
• tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• say why you thínk you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Jafari
This is Pourya Mirzaei. I am wondering if you still know me I am a person who you spoke with about a job vacancy in your restaurants. This letter is written in reply to your helpful suggestions.
Not until a week ago did we speak together on a plane to Istanbul about your restaurant. We spoke about the company's goals and plans which were highly valued. We had a lot of brainstorming throughout the subject and at the end of the day, you offered me to contact you for more information.
As we had talked about my interest, I am keen on cooking. actually, I have spent all my energy in this job since I was 20; therefore, I can work as a cook in a restaurant; however, I think I might be needed more experience to work as a chef because I have to learn about different kinds of dishes.
Having said about my desire to take this position, I have an academic degree in cooking and hold special qualifications in both Italian and Iranian dishes. I expertise in seafood as well; thus, I could be employed in any place you wish for.
Once again thank you for your recommendation. I am looking forward to your reply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...bout my interest, I am keen on cooking. actually, I have spent all my energy in this job...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36966824645 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73825393916 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5705066463 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212401234147 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771450540394 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516115342616 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120197325705 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630409791549 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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