During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.Write a letter to this businessman. In your letterr

Dear Sam,

I hope you are doing well.

Maybe you don’t remember me but we met on a plan during our journey from New Delhi to New York on September 5. I sat next to you and we discussed multiple topics at length.

I am writing this letter in connection of a possible job opportunity in one of your restaurants, mentioned by you during our meeting. Though you didn’t specify the details of the job, I’d like to inform you that I have a hotel management degree as well as working experience of a chef and I am greatly interested in the chef’s job. However, if this position isn’t available then I am willing to take any management job as well.

I consider myself suitable for a chef’s job as I have worked in multiple restaurants as well as in hotel kitchens. My chef experience includes working in all shifts under extreme pressure and I know how to handle customers’ choices as well as food critics. Apart from that, I also have the relatively same experience of managing a restaurant. Though it cannot be considered as vast as my chef experience I am confident enough to manage any restaurant well with the combined knowledge of various foods and being familiar with the atmosphere.

I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sumit

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82959641256 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95681343368 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3445227364 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17552515007 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751128060729 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826656387011 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105925463521 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742069643336 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.