Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe you

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Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor.

In the letter

● Describe your colleague’s job at the company

● Describe a time you worked with this Person

● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award

Dear Mr. Doe,

I’m writing this letter to recommend James for the “Employee of the Year” award. James joined us as an Intern and now he is a Software Engineer working with us since last 5 years.

I have worked with James on couple of projects and can definitely vouch for his commitment towards work. James was a part of my team for the ABC Project for 2 years and he has done exceptionally well to make the project success.

James always go an extra mile to reduce the manual efforts and have helped the team reduce the time spent on deployment process from 2 hours to just 10 minutes. He’s also a team player and always comes with a positive attitude to the work. I believe, his innovative thinking and attitude towards work makes him the best suitable candidate for this award.

I hope you will consider James for this award.

Yours sincerely,

John.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83225806452 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51857614665 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5768433067 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209423186207 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882033720485 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549421114627 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131269921659 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050543005226 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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