Essay topics: Essay topics: You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter1. Describe the problem2. Say how long it has been a problem3. Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Essay topics: Essay topics: You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
1. Describe the problem
2. Say how long it has been a problem
3. Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear Mr. Smith,

My name is Kumar Sampad and I am one of your neighbors, residing at 54 Danforth Avenue which is just adjacent to your big detached house from the south side. I am writing this letter to express my intense dissatisfaction regarding your way of parking cars at the side of the street.

Your entrance to the house is sharing just a single wooden fence with mine and whenever you park your newly purchased Audi SUV, it just blocks the entrance to my house partially. This is happening soon after you have started the renovation of your in-house parking lot and started placing the vehicle at the roadside. So, for the last couple of weeks, it is just causing me trouble while parking my car too on the same side. I hope you are understanding the issue and will take better strategy while parking. I would also suggest you to rent a nearby parking plot so that both of us will be a win-win situation for the time being until your renovation is being completed.

I look forward to hearing from you as early as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Kumar Sampad

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...my car too on the same side. I hope you are understanding the issue and will take better strategy...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your renovation is being completed. I look forward to hearing from you as ear...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63020833333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48112995616 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1822009358 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150114604633 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067876482304 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289371100112 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907541301113 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287408223962 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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