Essay topics:
You have recently bought a electronic device. It was broken after a while. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say:
- What and when did you buy?
- Why was it broken?
- Suggest how the problem could be solved.
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am writing to make a complaint about the mobile phone I have purchased from your authorized store last month. I bought a new handset Samsung A50 dual sim worth $200 with one year of company warranty and six months of accidental warranty. This was the last model in your store as per your sale person. After couple of days it was broken and neither start button nor charging port are working properly. I was really shocked as this problem, I discovered after just two days and do you know how much worse it could be! Afterwards, I went to your store and requested for replacement of my handset. Your assistant said if I wanted to replace my handset then I need to wait for a month, or he would replace with another mobile phone with the same worth. I am fond of mobile phones and it was awful really!
I am very dissatisfied with your product and your service as I can’t wait for a month because probably I have a lot work to do on mobile phone, thus either you arrange a quick replacement or refund my $200 as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Yash Pankaj Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t or refund my 00 as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Yash Pankaj Mehta
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, then, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43269230769 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46341575049 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5134008993 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161391480917 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707449647782 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578981037927 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10108044733 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566871496355 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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