Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am interested in an overseas opportunity to volunteer with the Cultural Expeditions. I fell passionate about the volunteering cause and it is generally agreed that your company is the leading authority in this matter. Furthermore, I would like to broaden my range of voluntary work because it is an ineffable pleasure contributing to develop childhood education.
I am currently a bilingual children instructor and a motivated professional with a variety of skills since I have experience with disabled kids. Moreover, I had spent two months in Paraguay teaching voluntarily in order to enhance my professional abilities as well as promote my own and local development.
I would like to volunteer to the position of children instructor for one month in Peru's next expedition. Nevertheless, if it is not possible, I will go wherever you allocate me.Therefore, I am able to contribute to the company as I have experience and no difficulty adapting to the requirements of the voluntary work position.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and attention.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Chandler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ble, I will go wherever you allocate me.Therefore, I am able to contribute to the company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28804347826 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31957571679 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1137677319 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235464022705 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874531502441 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573685631131 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137913365291 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668283743524 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.