favorite activity
As everybody, I like to do my favorite activity in my free time - planting flowers. In my garden,I have grown various kinds of plant such as lotus, sunflower, daisy, gerbera , and especially the rose. They bloom in turn making my house colorfull around year. All the thing I do is watering, catching insects, putting down fertilizer and turning over the soil. My favorite activity started when my parent gave me a small rose pot as a present on my 9th birthday. I watered my gift everyday and it finally bloomed which made me feel like a return for my effort. And then I found and grew more kind of flowers. For me, planting flowers is not only to grow and wait them to bloom, but also it is the assocition of my effort and my love to the flowers. Although planting does not cost a lot, and it is easy too, I need to take care of them seriouly. However, the plant I grow contribute to the fresh of the atmosphere and they are friendly to the environment. Shouldn't you know what to do in your free time, why don't you take up planting a rose, I beg you will like it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ee time - planting flowers. In my garden,I have grown various kinds of plant such ...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...such as lotus, sunflower, daisy, gerbera , and especially the rose. They bloom in ...
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Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t on my 9th birthday. I watered my gift everyday and it finally bloomed which made me fe...
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Line 1, column 956, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Shouldn't
...d they are friendly to the environment. Shouldnt you know what to do in your free time, ...
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Line 1, column 1008, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... know what to do in your free time, why dont you take up planting a rose, I beg you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, kind of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26237623762 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42239705604 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7159064786 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108812843239 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463483589244 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099471999216 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108812843239 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.