Eating fast food
Eating fast food is not good for your health. Firstly, fast food will increase your risk of obesity.Because this kind of food has a high fat content and very little vegetables or salads. When eating them, you assumpt a lot of calories, if you keep eating these food for a long time, you will probably gain weight and even become obese. Secondly, fast food may not be clean. There are many eating places which have been fined for not providing clean food. Dirty food can cause stomach ache and food poisoning. Thirdly, you may get malnutrition if you eat junk food regularly. Although these empty foods help you feel full and give you a lot of calories, they don’t have any necessary nutrients. Fourthly, many researches show that fast food may cause skin issues such as acne. These foods are also known as “hot” food so they are not good for your skin at all. In conclusion, eating too much fast food will have bad effects on your health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 41.998997996 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60355029586 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28038769979 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5299896607 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546521892627 0.244688304435 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254282931464 0.084324248473 302% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113107065188 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.546521892627 0.151304729494 361% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.