A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter– Thank him/her for inviting you– Describe how you felt about his/her family members– Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

– Thank him/her for inviting you
– Describe how you felt about his/her family members
– Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Dear Smith,

I would like to thank you for having me over at your home for the delicious dinner. The food was amazing and I had been feeling rather isolated but this get-together helped me to overcome it.

Furthermore, interaction with your family was the icing on the cake, I liked that your children have a deep interest in the new technological gadgets and its good to see that you are providing them the platform on which they can pursue their dreams. I have become a fan of your wife's cooking and I was delighted to see that she cooked us an Indian meal, you know it's my favorite. Apart from this, the movie you played was beautiful, and I would like to see more of your collection again sometime.

I would suggest that you should visit my home with your family on any coming weekend. Let's sit together to rejoice the time we had in our college.

I insist that you should visit on the coming weekend, rest as per your preference.

Looking forward to receiving your response.

With Regards,
Sumeet

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o see that she cooked us an Indian meal, you know its my favorite. Apart from thi...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...she cooked us an Indian meal, you know its my favorite. Apart from this, the movie...
^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...with your family on any coming weekend. Lets sit together to rejoice the time we had...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, apart from, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43301765932 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1953545475 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22515779745 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917121455256 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624793273725 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131480886356 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250666978864 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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