A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
a) give contact details for when you are away
b) give instructions about how to care for your pet
c) describe other household duties
Dear Sandy,
Hope you are doing well. It was nice to meet Susan and you, not to forget the kids at Maggie’s house party. As I informed you at the party, Nithya and self are planning for a five day trip to the Blue mountains and we really need your help in taking care of our house for these 5 days. Hope I’m not troubling you too much.
Actually, this trip was quite unplanned and I happened to stumble across a good deal over a stay at the famous “Sunshine Cottages” and thus sprang our plan into action. There are a few things, which I need to prep you about: we have an adorable 2 year old German Shepherd named Schottsky, which means Sweetheart in German. She is quite well behaved and won’t be much of a trouble to you. Our regular maid will take care of all the house hold chores, will wash the kennel and feed the dog in the morning & afternoon as well. All I request from your side is to take Schottsky out for a walk in the morning and evening and take care that she eats her dinner. Also, being summer, she tends to shed some hair, so request you to kindly groom her fur in the evening. The comb is kept on top of her kennel.
Also, one last request is, to please water the rose plants, that Nithya has planted in our lawn. Being summer, they tend to wither out, even, if we don’t water it for a day. You can reach out to me on my personal number and if not reachable, you can contact me at +61-40015001, which is the Cottage number.
Hope I’m not troubling you too much and thanks for your help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 293.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30716723549 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29334448822 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9745823496 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179424681092 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637029840497 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607415003889 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14002940151 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594255961103 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.