A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions on how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Rahul,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to provide you with the informations to help you to oversee my house while I will be in tour.
We received the Visa and tickets, so it will be some rush in coming days to get ready for the trip. In order to contact us when you need, please consider the phone number +6145852/ this is my cousin’s number who resides there, so things will be easier for you even also when I am not there.
You may know that I have a pet dog ‘Gimmy’ here in my house. He is not that much aggressive. You need to nourish him by giving hi the pet food available in the kitchen shelf. Likewise, in the evening, shower him with the fresh water, there is his favorite bathing soap inside the drawer which will make him fresh for long if used. At night, try to leave him unlocked, as it was being done regularly if not did so, he may not be well at nights.
Along with that, some home duties are to be overlooked by you. Mainly, the garden on the frontyard needs watering daily as it is made of some rare types of plants. there is a water-connection pipe near there to draw water. And also, the regular newspaper supplement has been postponed for up to trip duration. However, if the agent supplies it, please let him stop doing it. so that is it. It will be grateful for us if you take care ours as yours by above mentioned manner. I about to write another letter to you when I reach the destination.
I am looking forward for your much needed help.
Yours with love
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... manner. I about to write another letter to you when I reach the destination. I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30344827586 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42471421021 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2617497742 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6842105263 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251685552579 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767823565606 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730995651432 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145469842804 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420302563065 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.