A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •
give contact details for when you are away •
give instructions about how to care for your pet •
describe other household duties
Dear Anne,
Thank you for agreeing to take care of my house and my dog - Tommy, while I am away on a holiday in Indonesia. Although my mobile number will be unreachable for, I have not opted for international roaming, you can reach me via the number given by the hotel which is +9876543210.
Additionally, let me explain provide you with certain instructions to take care of my pet. Firstly, give him food twice a day and do not fall for his innocent looks, where he will trick you to feed him more. However, ensure that his water bowl is always full. Secondly, take him for a walk in the morning and evening so that he does not messes the house. Thirdly, give him a bath once a week, even though he may resist at first.
Last but not the least, please water my plants and also feed the fishes. Occasionally, the mail box can be checked and call the maid if you find the house unusually dusty.
I look forward to meeting you once I am back.
Your friend
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mess'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: mess
...morning and evening so that he does not messes the house. Thirdly, give him a bath onc...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mess'
Suggestion: mess
...morning and evening so that he does not messes the house. Thirdly, give him a bath onc...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38674033149 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38742428378 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4978815208 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246249932736 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907080140465 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839029531293 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103716361501 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454347284943 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.