A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to express my gratification that you have agreed to take care of my house and my pet when I am on holiday.
I will be visiting singapore, an island city from 14th september till 28th september with my friends. it is a very beautiful place with many tourist attractions such as the Sentosa Beach, National Museum of singapore, Bird Park and Night Safari. If you wish to contact me regarding some issues, I will be available on 9885554655 number.
my dog Rodger is nice and calm pet. he will not disturb you in any way. please feed him with dog food three times a day and bath him once in two days. Additionally, take him for a morning and evening walk as he loves to go outside and play.
Apart from taking care of my dog please water my plants daily as it is very hot outside and also please do the cleaning of the house and wash the dishes on regular basis.
once again i am very thankful that you have given you consent of looking after my home and my dog.
take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Anna, Hello, how are you? Hope you are having ...
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... house and my pet when I am on holiday. I will be visiting singapore, an island ...
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...er till 28th september with my friends. it is a very beautiful place with many tou...
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...will be available on 9885554655 number. my dog Rodger is nice and calm pet. he w...
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... care and see you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41706161137 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26656259354 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7131696292 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148842663083 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560407513079 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501053049164 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871676695536 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621461227681 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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