A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him her in his her country You have never been there before and need some information before you leave Write a letter to your friend In your letter request advise about a gift for his her familyask abo

Dear Mel,

I hope this letter finds you good health. First of all, thank you very much for asking me to visit Singapore and I am excited to meet you all.

As you know, I never visited Asia countries before so I thought of writing to you to get some information clarified before I make my trip.

I am planning to bring some present for your daughter. It would be great if you can share about her hobbies and interest so I can come up with some choices and buy some memorable gift.

Apart from that, what sort of outfits suitable for Singapore weather? Also, what kind of activities are we likely to do while I am there such as swimming, trekking etc., so I can pack my swimming gears and trainers.

Finally, as you know I am recently turned vegan. I have no problem eating egg and fish but can’t take red meat. Hope it’s not a serious problem.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Regards,

Sundar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... a serious problem. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Regards, Sundar
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, so, while, apart from, kind of, sort of, such as, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49704142012 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27671516722 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704142011834 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3019874421 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0909090909 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 4.34317383033 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317432137008 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944092613984 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894357363565 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152677726179 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986549776583 0.0580467560999 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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