It is argued that the social communication websites such as Facebook has detrimental impact to citizens of the country and local community. This essay disagrees with this statement because it’s convenient for people to stay connected and solve many social economic problems
The most significant role of the social website allows people to stay connected and build the relationship stronger. Most of the people don’t have enough time to visit their friends and relatives often due to hectic work schedules. As a result, relationship become shallow. For example, the earlier day’s people live in extended family so they have strong bonding however at present majority of the families prefer to live in nuclear family. Hence, these social mediums definitely have more advantages. Additionally, it also eliminates the need to call and the messages conveyed through the social websites can be communicated much faster when something important occurs in your life.
Another important advantage of social networking site such as Facebook has many community groups where citizens are allowed to discuss on the topics on social issues and encouraged to suggest solutions for experts to review and implement for public welfare. Also, social websites are to find the missing persons. Recent study found that 27% of disappearing cases were resolved with the help information shared by the Facebook community users. Due to the large number of likes, shares the message become more popular and the respective authorities can take quick measures to resolve the case.
In conclusion, social networking sites are increasing number of benefits for the people and nation because it builds effective relationship and constructive influence throughout the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55185185185 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7778790105 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7123634355 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158354605137 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566519796969 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498833904344 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103203032579 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023512523844 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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