A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country.
You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advice about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing
find out about the food
Dear Senthil,
How are you? Hope you are doing well? Thank you for inviting me to your country. This is the first time I am going to travel to aboard, due to that I need few details for packing the luggage for this trip.
Firstly, I planned to buy few famous sweets from my hometown, also I like to buy traditional handmade saree and dhoti for your parents as a surprise gift. I guess they might like this gift if you have any other suggestions let me know so I can buy accordingly. Secondly, I am going to stay for three weeks, this will be my first experience where temperature goes in negative Celsius. So, let me know what type of clothes I should bring to keep myself warm. Share me the activities, locations, places you have planned to take me during this trip. You know that I’m allergic to non- vegetarian foods and packed foods. So, get me a hotel where I can get more vegetarian and organic food during my stay. If you need anything from here let me know.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Regards,
Sreenivas
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| 2019-09-30 | Sreenivasan Murugappan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 706, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tarian and organic food during my stay. If you need anything from here let me know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48421052632 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38325181143 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3007407965 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5384615385 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202821272209 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972189157866 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788101185642 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170680115346 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585911380669 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.