A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we met each other last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to suggest you an amazing city to visit where In Austria.
My family and I have been in Zell-Am-See city last year while our annual holiday, and it is located up North of Austria. When we made a spontaneous decision to travel to Europe, we could not have a better place. The sight-seeing was amazing, and we were fascinated with the weather and landscaping.
I had several choices for the accommodation, but I preferred to stay at a five stars hotel where in the top of the mountain. We booked Deluxe room with large balcony; however, it was quite small for us. Although you may find the weather very cold during your planned stay, you will find various places to visit, firstly, the forest and its amazing planets, and secondly, you can take a tour around the famous Zell lake.
Different cousins were available in the city, and I have tried their traditional food on several days. They have a special way to cook the fish and shrimps, and It was extremely delicious and tasty. I would therefore that you take this chance and try it to give me your opinion.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64220183486 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43859009602 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6077847281 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262771788722 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747031333305 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978638765123 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149348971783 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745316894504 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.