Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I heard that you and your wife are planning a trip during upcoming holidays, so I am writing to suggest a great place that I visited last summer.
Initially, I was planning to go to Hawaii, but later on, I changed the destination to Tokyo, Japan. Although the trip took 23 hours, the hotel that I stayed after I arrived was superb. It was called Haiku hotel, located in eastern parts of the city. I’m sure any taxi driver in Tokyo can get you there.
There are a lot of things you can do during your stay. The hotel itself has a great spa that you can relax in and forget all about work. In addition, they have a tour to nearby tourist destinations. I recommend the jungle tour which is quite an adventure. Moreover, trying the cuisine is very exciting. Everything from tuna sushi to noodle soups is impeccably fresh and exotic.
I hope you will have the same great experience I had. Please do not hesitate to ask if you need any further information.
All the best,
Willie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51832460733 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39277899096 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664921465969 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.955436475 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5333333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304764971289 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882100035209 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871220100773 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18734907323 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695957070997 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.