Dear Divya,
I hope you are doing well.I would recommend you to go visit Colorado.Its a very beautiful place. We went on a hiking trip to Colorado,the destination places were mesmerizing.I will list down the places where we hiked, Emerald lake, Bear lake, The loch, Glass of lake and Sky pond.
We had booked a Airbnb in Frisco.The room were clean and tidy.It had a beautiful lake view from the rear view of the house.you can book it online.
Lot of adventurous things you can do in Colorado.I would suggest to go for rafting and hiking.I hope you will a great vacation. Let me know if you want to know any details.
Best Wishes
Shruti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: suggest going; suggest gonna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 535.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 206.0 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57875572639 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704347826087 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 161.1 290.88556701 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8653380071 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284523255216 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136721325059 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111766820428 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188922066728 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780366734149 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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