A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.
1- Say where you went,
2- Where you stayed,
3- What you can do there
4- What the food was like.
Dear Fred,
It`s been so long since we met last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to recommend for you a good place to visit where in Austria for your next holiday.
The city is Zell-Am-See in Northern Austria. When I made a decision to travel for a holiday, I couldn`t have chosen a better place. It is a little bit far from the capital, but you`ll enjoy its amazing sight-seeing and fascinating weather.
There are a lot of places which are worth to visit, and the main attraction is the mountain trip. It seduces many tourists from all around the world. There were several options for the accommodation, but I chose a five-stars hotel on the top of the mountain to enjoy the view from room`s balcony.
I know that you`re more concerned about food at any of your holidays; therefore, Zell-Am-See is the perfect place to find variety in the available cuisines. They have also a very special meal which is one of their traditional food. It`s ingredients from fish and shrimps. It was so delicious, and I liked it immensely.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...s;t have chosen a better place. It is a little bit far from the capital, but you'll e...
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it immensely. Warm regards, Ayoub
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86979166667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82423765986 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6433908184 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9230769231 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243400631974 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679150270208 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125131670309 0.0603063233224 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156461044187 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127505467819 0.0580467560999 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.