A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of the course you took at the university
explain why you recommend the university
give some advice about how to apply
Dear Varleen,
Good to hear from you again! I’m also doing fine here at the student accommodation of Hyderabad University. You must've heard about this budding course but let me enlighten you with even more details. Architecture is quite a diverse as well as vast syllabus which includes topics varying from arts, mechanics, materials, urban design and many more.
Did you get a chance to drop by at this University? If not do let know me, I'll be happy to help you out and give you a tour of our campus here which not only has extravagant spacious lecture halls but also beautiful site landscapes that are lush green and sustainable. You will be mesmerized for sure!
You should definitely apply here for this course. Not only is it easy but also a quick procedure. Visit the university website, fill up the form, give an online test of half an hour duration and Voila, It’s done! If you manage to pass this exam, the administration department shall grant you admission. Infact, I was thinking of sharing my room with you.
Can’t wait to see you soon!
Yours friendly
Manjyot
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- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 254 words 89
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- Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: must've
...ommodation of Hyderabad University. You mustve heard about this budding course but let...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...this University? If not do let know me, Ill be happy to help you out and give you a...
^^^
Line 12, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you soon! Yours friendly Manjyot
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82010582011 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58424311497 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.73544973545 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6696794124 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283897612158 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109436071215 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799336966414 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128991196619 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431913176323 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.