Good Sample Letters Worth Reading
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a
letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am going to visit your town in the first of June which will be after one month. I need some information to organize my trip as i have limited time to spend there.
First of all,I decided to spend seven days at your town and booked a hotel near the city center but unfortunately when I tried to search the internet about the touristic placesI could not found much information. Therefor, I need some suggestion from your office regards the attraction places and the travel agencies that organize such activities; Moreover, I will be glad if you inform me with the well-known shopping malls and public parks around the city. As its the first time for me to visit the village, it would be stunning to include a list of restaurants which provide traditional food. I heard from one of my friends that there is lots of events which take place throughout the year; Consequently, I need to know if any of these events are happening during my stay and if yes please provide me with the dates, prices, and how to book it.
I would like to receive this information by mail or you can send it by fax if you wish
Yours faithfully
Adam Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-21 | Ahmedsetta | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-21 | Ahmedsetta | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-21 | Ahmedsetta | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-21 | Ahmedsetta | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-21 | Ahmedsetta | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ted time to spend there. First of all,I decided to spend seven days at your tow...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded to spend seven days at your town and booked a hotel near the city center but ...
^^
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ls and public parks around the city. As its the first time for me to visit the vill...
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Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...od. I heard from one of my friends that there is lots of events which take place throughout t...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...il or you can send it by fax if you wish Yours faithfully Adam Smith
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by fax if you wish Yours faithfully Adam Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49056603774 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4906553729 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0262113556 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 16.8248392259 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175379569169 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798686585617 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038305048629 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129890751739 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163840713056 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.