The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The chart displayed below gives some information about the size of the subway system in three major European cities, mainly: the London Underground, the Paris Metro, and the Moscow Metro. Each subway system is differentiated in three categories which is the total track length, the number of stations in operation, and the number of daily passengers.
Using the metro on a day to day basis is necessary for some people because it is their primary source of transportation to travel from one place to another to disregard the traffic jams caused by pedestrians and other private and public vehicle. So, the metro is one of the commonly used mode of transportation in the whole world. Focusing on the major subway system in Europe, the London Underground has the longest path period with a distance of 408 km long. While the Moscow Metro and Paris Metro only have a distance of 300 km and 214 km long respectively. Second focal point of this topic is the sum of stations per operation, the Paris Metro has hundreds of stations in operations ranging up to 300 stations while the London Underground only has 275 stations and the Moscow Metro has 182 stations. Lastly is the total passengers, a lot of people use the Moscow Metro that is going up to 6.5 million people considerably that has the second largest path period and the least figure of stations. Followed by the Paris Metro that is ranging up to 4.5 million people given that it has the least path period and has the most figure of stations. Lastly, 3 million people use the London Underground even though it has the greatest distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compared to the Paris Metro.
- one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages 67
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing do u agree or disagree 56
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in tjree major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting thr main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries Do you agree or disagree Yes I do feel that universities should have an equal budget for their libraries as well as sport activities It is 11
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1269, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 937.175257732 167% => OK
No of words: 323.0 206.0 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83591331269 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64134773986 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442724458204 0.622605031667 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4819164733 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902801632121 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514125045001 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770746820552 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133433685449 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112238271125 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.