the graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of the meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The graph gives information about the number of beef , lamb , chicken, and fish consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall , the consumption of those foods dramatically changed .One person’s chicken consumption per week increased dramatically . Meanwhile the consumption of beef , lamb, and fish decreased.
In the year 1979, beef was consumed the most ( about 220 grams per person per week. ), fish was consumed the least ( 150 grams per person per week) , and chicken and lamb were consumed about 145 to 150 grams per person per week. But in 1982 the consumption of beef , lamb and fish significantly fall respectively ( about 220 to 170 ; about 150 to 120 ; about 60 to 45 grams per person per week. Meanwhile, the consumption of chicken raised rapidly. The chicken was eaten up to 145 to 170 grams per person per week.
In 2002 the consumption of chicken, lamp , fish increased. By contrast, the consumption of beef decreased . The consumption of chicken raised rapidly ( about 255 grams per person per week ) . The consumption of beef fell dramatically (approximately 100 grams per person per week ) , meanwhile, lamb and fish increased lightly respectively about 45 to 50 ; about 60 to 65 grams per person per week )
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0099009901 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88070410057 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391089108911 0.622605031667 63% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.685142041 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 2.54639175258 1021% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110162341165 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758814429392 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669519786444 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12582655913 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836764007748 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.