The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the price of three different food groups and how these price changed from 1979 to 2009 and the overall trend in consumer price index over the period of 30 years.
Overall, it is clear that prices of three food group and consumer price index increased during the 30-year period. Only figures for fresh fruits and vegetables were higher than overall increase in consumer price index.
It can be seen from the graph that in 1979, prices for three food group were similar, approximately 65. Figures for sugars ans sweets and carbonated drinks in creased gradually during the period and were highest in 2009, about 200 and 150 respectively. However, both figures were lower than consumer price index over the period.
Pricecs for fresh fruits and vegetables were highest in almost years over the 30-year period. It fluctuated slightly at the start of the period and finished at roughly 330 in 2009.
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- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write 61
- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'group' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'groups'.
Suggestion: groups
..., it is clear that prices of three food group and consumer price index increased duri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98064516129 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24549496964 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8782286284 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15717152459 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791421948538 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372488977633 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106938931637 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200818232632 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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